Stone-Tha-Killa's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Swarming Tutorial]

Well...

I like where you were going with the test, and it's great in theory, but honestly, some people would get REALLY frustrated if they don't know much AS and they want to use that, because you made it so difficult.
Graphics-Let's be honest, they were EXTREMELY limited. +2 for the flies at the end.
Style-Good tutorial, not very informative, but original.
Sound-Well... That music started to bug me after a while... haha, get it? bug...
Violence/humor-None...
Interactivity-Well, the buttons worked... Not very nice text on them, but they worked. I wish there had been a "Menu" button on the test, that pissed me off when I got a question wrong because that was the first thing I clicked. SHould've switched the buttons, people usually start from the left.
Overall-Like I said I liked it, but it needs to be improved to get a better vote from me. Try harder next time.

PARAGON-pvp responds:

To tell you the truth, I personally think that people that don't know much AS won't be using this tutorial, and even if they are, I did my best to explain it in an easy way to understand, In a way that I personally would understand if I was just learning something, and about the test, I tried to make the questions easy by doing something like just naming a part of the script that I explained, like "whats the MC called" I think that question is pretty easy seing as it's in the first frame of the tutorial, and the last two, they were just naming what was the first line of the script, and a section that was in the last part of the script, I thought anyone with half a brain could figure those out, I didn't want a menu button in the test because when you click a wrong answer it takes you back to the menu, thanks for the review, I hope you can understand my method now.

PARAGON_pvp

[[OLD]Pacman Twisted]

Well then...

Style-2, because I like pacman...
Graphics, Sound, Interactivity, and Overall-1, because they were there, and that's pretty much it.
Violence-10, This is violent to the pacman name. In no way should you ever associate an atrocity like this to pacman.
I read your directions. Pressed enter. Pacman was missing. If this is some kind of spinoff of a long lost mario game, you've succeeded. But you tell the guy he didn't read directions. If you read the directions, it gives you just basics, that everyone knows already from several other games.
Get better at making buttons, graphics, using sound, etc., then submit again. Regardless of my previous gutting, which you deserved for attacking the innocent observer, you may have something here. If you WORK on it, you might have something. Try harder next time.

[Airhockey GAME]

Not the greatest

As others have said, the puck slows too fast.

The sounds got repetitive and annoying.

I kept getting owned because when you hit the puck slightly backward it flys into your own goal.

[Sim Hell 2.0]

I really enjoyed it.

Maybe we could collab on something. Send me an email.

[Evasion]

Headache...

Could've used more diverse music, less background distraction, and better control. Also, I'm getting hit by stars that don't hit me, what's up with that?! Good job, but try harder next time.

[Mockstress v4]

Well

It was pretty good, but it didn't offer much action, variety, or replay value. It did keep my interest by being slightly humorous and a good time killer, and overall it was pretty fun. Good job.

[Pong Mania]

Awesome

It was a great game, but I had difficulty with the four way game...

[kewl tutorial mix]

Few things

Nobody wants to LEARN how to draw STICK figures... It's the most simplistic thing on flash. Second, there are better tecniques for shading, such as the gradient effect. Your blood wasn't very good. Your music was great, but it got very repetitive. The back on the main menu for flash doesn't work. The movement thing was pretty cool, but you should have added animation when it moved. The dress up game was very basic. Try harder next time.

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[Extreme Bitch Makeover]

Mildly amusing.

Okay. First off, if you're going to make it a person who would be conceded, make them at least look good. That girl looked like she'd try to be nice to anyone.
The style was great... Trick a bitch out... nice.
No sound, no score.
Violence. It might not seem like there is violence, but think deeper. Scars and wounds=Violence.
It wasn't very well put together in the "interactivity" section. You made it so that you had to click almost directly on the middle to pick something up. It kind of takes away from the humor.
Humor was mildly amusing. It's fun to put crap on her, but, like I said before, the fact that the girl doesn't seem like she'd be mean takes away from it.
Overall it's a good thing for wasting time when other animations are loading up, :P